Monday, 13 December 2010

Task Presented.. L.O.1.4

Hey everyone I done my task today 13/12/10 Monday.
In my second lesson I had an interview with our Client (our school Headteacher) Miss Freear. 
I had to talk to her and tell her what was my task. I introduced myself and told her that as my task I choosed Sixth Form and I starts showing her my draft my 4 draft that I done till I get to my final advert (product).
I showed her what I have changed and how I changed it but I didnt say a lot of things about it because i was so nervous. Than when I finished with that I showed her my final product (a poster for Sixth Form) as my homework or plus work actually I printed out as a poster. Than I showed it to her and waited till she gave me feedback :


 She said:
WWW:
  • She liked my slogan ( she though its a quatation but I explaint it to her that its my own slogan) She said it was excellent
"COnvent is the Best, for get the Rest"
  •  Writing:  Sixth Formers got dress code and I find it inportant
  • Enthusiasm, developing my prodact through my drafts that I done in L.O. 1.3
  • Big Reveal (my own poster in big size in a tube)
  • The process- big drama - Get her interested
  • Final product excellent and talked through
  • Our school is oustanding <- I made the word stands out and make it bolt.

EBI:
  • I only used one picture should used more
  • She asked me where Outstanding comes and I should answer Ofsted report.


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