Mr. Foleys Lesson and This Week Tuesday lesson with Miss Connel

In Tuesday we began plannig the letter for 1.5 letter
Miss Connel gave us a recoomendation of things to discuss through L.O. 1.5
E.g:

• What did we learnt from starts to end in Learning Objective 1.1 to 1.5
• What did we learnt from research and planning?
• What did we learnt that helped us make our draft better? (discuss WWW and EBI)
• What do we need to discuss and how did it help to do our drafts etc.

This recoomendation helps me a lot and gaves me ideas what ecxetly I can write in my letter for L.O 1.5


Today in Mr Foley's lesson we get an information sheet from him of what we have to include or should include in our Letter for L.O .1.5. In that sheet we asked to keep the layout and the address of the Sixth Form and for start we can use Dear Mr. Foley as he is the Boss of our Company (C.S.U.A.). We need to use "I" as our work its invidual work and we like managers. First that you have to write that introduce yourself and your position member of staff. Say what I have been doin ( creating a product for a client)


In paragraph one we have to include what we did in L.O. 1.1 and we have to summarise our work in a shor way. We have to write what went well and even better if and after that we have to show our understanding what we done work and what we can do to make it better and why?


In the second paragraph we have to talk about what we done in L.O 1.2 and 1.3 and also summarise what have we done in this L.O.'s we also have to write about our WWW and EBI but not as much we write in L.O. 1.1. We need to make our ideas developed and show/evaluate what we have learnt.


In paragraph three we have to write about L.O. 1.4 but this paragraph should be a the shortest one of all 3 and I should introduce the idea of  telling something / some ideas about my product and that how my interview went with our client. (Mrs Freear)


Lastly we should close the letter worth the final sentence thay says why my BOSS ( Mr. Foley) should use my advert and what make me a positive and creative minded person/ member of the company (C.S.U.A) for the future?


What have I learnt: to be positive and say negative things but show your understaing that say wat whould u do to make it better. Do not use exclamation of question marks. My tone language should be apropiate.