Hey everyone :D
I forget to write it down that I already done my health and safety task
for L.O. 1.5
In monday Mr. Mills explained to us the health and safety task and showed as a website to have a look and to get evidence of
http://www.clothesshowlive.com-site-default-files-schoolriskessesment/ and this will help us out and give us information and ideas.
Thursday, 16 December 2010
Mr. Foleys Lesson and This Week Tuesday lesson with Miss Connel
In Tuesday we began plannig the letter for 1.5 letter
Miss Connel gave us a recoomendation of things to discuss through L.O. 1.5
E.g:
Today in Mr Foley's lesson we get an information sheet from him of what we have to include or should include in our Letter for L.O .1.5. In that sheet we asked to keep the layout and the address of the Sixth Form and for start we can use Dear Mr. Foley as he is the Boss of our Company (C.S.U.A.). We need to use "I" as our work its invidual work and we like managers. First that you have to write that introduce yourself and your position member of staff. Say what I have been doin ( creating a product for a client)
In paragraph one we have to include what we did in L.O. 1.1 and we have to summarise our work in a shor way. We have to write what went well and even better if and after that we have to show our understanding what we done work and what we can do to make it better and why?
In the second paragraph we have to talk about what we done in L.O 1.2 and 1.3 and also summarise what have we done in this L.O.'s we also have to write about our WWW and EBI but not as much we write in L.O. 1.1. We need to make our ideas developed and show/evaluate what we have learnt.
In paragraph three we have to write about L.O. 1.4 but this paragraph should be a the shortest one of all 3 and I should introduce the idea of telling something / some ideas about my product and that how my interview went with our client. (Mrs Freear)
Lastly we should close the letter worth the final sentence thay says why my BOSS ( Mr. Foley) should use my advert and what make me a positive and creative minded person/ member of the company (C.S.U.A) for the future?
What have I learnt: to be positive and say negative things but show your understaing that say wat whould u do to make it better. Do not use exclamation of question marks. My tone language should be apropiate.
Miss Connel gave us a recoomendation of things to discuss through L.O. 1.5
E.g:
- What did we learnt from starts to end in Learning Objective 1.1 to 1.5
- What did we learnt from research and planning?
- What did we learnt that helped us make our draft better? (discuss WWW and EBI)
- What do we need to discuss and how did it help to do our drafts etc.
Today in Mr Foley's lesson we get an information sheet from him of what we have to include or should include in our Letter for L.O .1.5. In that sheet we asked to keep the layout and the address of the Sixth Form and for start we can use Dear Mr. Foley as he is the Boss of our Company (C.S.U.A.). We need to use "I" as our work its invidual work and we like managers. First that you have to write that introduce yourself and your position member of staff. Say what I have been doin ( creating a product for a client)
In paragraph one we have to include what we did in L.O. 1.1 and we have to summarise our work in a shor way. We have to write what went well and even better if and after that we have to show our understanding what we done work and what we can do to make it better and why?
In the second paragraph we have to talk about what we done in L.O 1.2 and 1.3 and also summarise what have we done in this L.O.'s we also have to write about our WWW and EBI but not as much we write in L.O. 1.1. We need to make our ideas developed and show/evaluate what we have learnt.
In paragraph three we have to write about L.O. 1.4 but this paragraph should be a the shortest one of all 3 and I should introduce the idea of telling something / some ideas about my product and that how my interview went with our client. (Mrs Freear)
Lastly we should close the letter worth the final sentence thay says why my BOSS ( Mr. Foley) should use my advert and what make me a positive and creative minded person/ member of the company (C.S.U.A) for the future?
What have I learnt: to be positive and say negative things but show your understaing that say wat whould u do to make it better. Do not use exclamation of question marks. My tone language should be apropiate.
Tuesday, 14 December 2010
Monday, 13 December 2010
Task Presented.. L.O.1.4
Hey everyone I done my task today 13/12/10 Monday.
In my second lesson I had an interview with our Client (our school Headteacher) Miss Freear.
I had to talk to her and tell her what was my task. I introduced myself and told her that as my task I choosed Sixth Form and I starts showing her my draft my 4 draft that I done till I get to my final advert (product).
I showed her what I have changed and how I changed it but I didnt say a lot of things about it because i was so nervous. Than when I finished with that I showed her my final product (a poster for Sixth Form) as my homework or plus work actually I printed out as a poster. Than I showed it to her and waited till she gave me feedback :
She said:
WWW:
In my second lesson I had an interview with our Client (our school Headteacher) Miss Freear.
I had to talk to her and tell her what was my task. I introduced myself and told her that as my task I choosed Sixth Form and I starts showing her my draft my 4 draft that I done till I get to my final advert (product).
I showed her what I have changed and how I changed it but I didnt say a lot of things about it because i was so nervous. Than when I finished with that I showed her my final product (a poster for Sixth Form) as my homework or plus work actually I printed out as a poster. Than I showed it to her and waited till she gave me feedback :
She said:
WWW:
- She liked my slogan ( she though its a quatation but I explaint it to her that its my own slogan) She said it was excellent
- Writing: Sixth Formers got dress code and I find it inportant
- Enthusiasm, developing my prodact through my drafts that I done in L.O. 1.3
- Big Reveal (my own poster in big size in a tube)
- The process- big drama - Get her interested
- Final product excellent and talked through
- Our school is oustanding <- I made the word stands out and make it bolt.
- I only used one picture should used more
- She asked me where Outstanding comes and I should answer Ofsted report.
Monday, 6 December 2010
6th of Dec. Mr Foley Tripple Lesson
Today, we started working on LO1.4 and finishing LO.1.3. I printed my drafts out for L.O. 1.3 and all I have to do is see where I done something went wonrg with it so I can improve it for the final advert in L.O1.4.It is due for Monday, I do my work in Photoshop and InDesign
13th December, Mrs Freear will come and see our final work and she will discuss it like: what its good and what is bed on it.
First Draft that I done i didnt use pictures and i used to much information I done that with Miss Connel My second draft was with more Colour but I used the school colours so it came out bright but my final draft for The L.O. 1.3 task I did in InDesign with Mr Foley. I added a 2 pictures and information about the sixth form, the subjects and of course how people can contact the school.
For the 1.4 what I have to improve is:
I also had folder check with Paula and Andreea and we decided what we missin and how we can improve our work.
I learnt to be patient with my class mates as I always help them and I learnt from Andreea how to make my background colourful in Indesing :D So thank YOU :D xx
13th December, Mrs Freear will come and see our final work and she will discuss it like: what its good and what is bed on it.
First Draft that I done i didnt use pictures and i used to much information I done that with Miss Connel My second draft was with more Colour but I used the school colours so it came out bright but my final draft for The L.O. 1.3 task I did in InDesign with Mr Foley. I added a 2 pictures and information about the sixth form, the subjects and of course how people can contact the school.
For the 1.4 what I have to improve is:
- Use colours
- Add the background
- Make the address and the contact
- Change Font
- Make the Keywords Standout
I also had folder check with Paula and Andreea and we decided what we missin and how we can improve our work.
I learnt to be patient with my class mates as I always help them and I learnt from Andreea how to make my background colourful in Indesing :D So thank YOU :D xx
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