I know that I need to include more information about the target audience to show my understanding of it.
I Have to have more pictures to support what I'm saying and a much clear layout I will all do this in my second draft of this presentation.
Thursday, 29 September 2011
Unit 4: Assignment 1: Magazine Analysis, Teacher Assessment
This is The feedback that I got from Miss Connell for my Magazine Presentation.
I know that I need to include more information about the target audience to show my understanding of it.
I Have to have more pictures to support what I'm saying and a much clear layout I will all do this in my second draft of this presentation.
I know that I need to include more information about the target audience to show my understanding of it.
I Have to have more pictures to support what I'm saying and a much clear layout I will all do this in my second draft of this presentation.
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