Tuesday, 23 November 2010

23rd of Nov. Self Assessment 1.2

Hi everyone In Miss Connel lesson I had to make rough sketches of adverts in L.O. 1.2
My advertising focus for year 7 are print ( newspaper) and Tv board in the school
What went well about my year 7 adverts are the details on my newspaper, the infromation and the pictures were good in my TV board advert my pictures was good and the infromation look welcoming and pleasant
The year 7 adverts would be even better if in my print it should be more pictures  and less infromation  and the same in my Tv board advert.

My advertising focus for the sixth form are Internet (school homepage) and School Newsletter
What went well about my sixth form adverts are Internet: Good details and the idea that there is going to be moving images, the fact that on the website you can click on a link and it would open a other website page where you can read more about the sixth form In my other advert  School Newsletter: the infromation is welcoming and that I draw and write the logo and the slogan in the newsletter.
The sixth form adverts would be even better if In my School Newsletter there is to much writing and it should be clear and interesting to people to read it so i should use bullet points

In the peer assessment I learned that if I write a lot of details to make it interesting I have to use a same amount of pictures as well and if its too much information than I could make a link where people want to read more and open another page where they can see more pictured and read more, as I learnt that I also learn to make my advert clear, everyone could understand it and for that I could use Bullet points. Also moving images are very good and interesting.

Out of all the adverts I would like to further develop Sixth Form Poster advert because that advert could go to a local areas and people would see it and they would come to our open evening and they could see as I done in my advert that people are friendly here and the school is OUTSTANDING and that we welcome everyone to this school.

Out of all the adverts I would not like to further develop the year 7 Tv board advert because that is in our school or it could go to our website but not many people could see if its in our school just our students and it would not be able to go further like to the street or mothers who liked to find a good school for their children.

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